When the heart turns soft and beholds
17Jan11
Like traffic, the busy fumes
of a clogged heart do not
seek solace.
The many earthly loves do not help,
The world in all it offers is
mute,
and it fills none; it
empties.
But like key into lock, some
Great Wind,
strange and compelling, strikes you
into a known whirlwind,
strong and solid;
a phenomenon
of epiphany
and it is realised!
It is felt from your depths,
This is what the beginning was.
This is what it always will be.
Filed under: emotional, spiritual, the little things | 7 Comments
Tags: elusive search, God, solace, the Holy Spirit, troubled heart
Oh lovely! You have such strong emotional effect. The images are not clear, like seen through mist…or very delicate wafer thin paper…but the impact is like breathing cool, spring, air. Very nice.
A really insightful comment 🙂 Yes, I read my poem over again a couple of times and you’re right, it does have that faint, misty effect. Thanks for stopping by, Kolembo!
Very beautiful spiritual poem. I love the image of the Holy Spirit as wind. You are so wise for being so young. Blessings.
Yes, I suddenly felt the need to express the power and substantiveness of the Holy Spirit as compared to earthly or material things. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind comments!
divine sentiments..
love your words…
Thanks Jingle 🙂
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